LCDS Interview answer 4

2024-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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4 “I chose LCDS because of its strong focus on contemporary dance and performance, which aligns perfectly with my interests and long-term goals. The opportunity to work with world-renowned choreographers and to be exposed to different performance styles and creative processes is incredibly appealing to me. I am also excited about the collaborative nature of the program, which I believe will allow me to learn from my peers and grow in a supportive, dynamic environment. LCDS’s emphasis on artistic innovation and pushing the boundaries of movement is exactly what I am looking for in a graduate program.

강사 첨삭

Good morning YOUNG IN!
I was genuinely impressed by your effort in practicing and memorizing. I hope you\'d be able to make it on your interview! Don\'t forget to be confident and keep yourself focused. It\'s normal to get nervous, so you\'ve got to take a deep breath and be yourself! I tried my best to simplify your answer for some words seem to be difficult.  Keep up the great work!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
4 “I chose LCDS because of its strong focus on contemporary dance and performance, which aligns perfectly with my interests and long-term goals. The opportunity to work with world-renowned choreographers and to be exposed to different performance styles and creative processes is incredibly appealing to me. I am also excited about the collaborative nature of the program, which I believe will allow me to learn from my peers and grow in a supportive, dynamic environment. LCDS’s emphasis on artistic innovation and pushing the boundaries of movement is exactly what I am looking for in a graduate program.
>>>I chose LCDS because it focuses on contemporary dance and performance, which matches my interests and goals. I am excited about the chance to work with famous choreographers and experience different dance styles and creative processes. I also like the program\'s teamwork, which will help me learn from others and grow in a supportive environment. LCDS’s focus on new ideas and pushing the limits of movement is exactly what I want in a graduate program.

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