leader\'s dignity
학생이 쓴 원문
These days I have a lot of worries when I look at the leaders in the world including Korea.
America, Russia , Israel and Korea and so on around in the world many abnormal person are becoming leader .
Owing to them, the world is dander and misery.
They have one common, they never reflect their wrong belief and delusional behavior.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Leaders today face many challenges, but unfortunately, when they reach a \"checkmate\" situation, some abuse their power by enforcing rules that ordinary people are unable to resist.
Thank you for sharing this. Have a great weekend!
Aki~
These days I have a lot of worries when I look at the leaders in the world including Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
America, Russia, Israel and Korea and so on around in the world many abnormal person are becoming leader .
>>> America, Russia, Israel Korea, and so on around the world many abnormal people are becoming leaders.
Owing to them, the world is dander and misery.
>>> Owing to them, the world is dangerous and miserable.
They have one common, they never reflect their wrong belief and delusional behavior.
>>> CORRECT!
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