Learning

2020-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elica

학생이 쓴 원문

I always think learning and attitude to learn important and it should continue even if we get older. In Korea we tend to think that after graduating from the high school, we do not have to study anymore. But I think it is because we study for a good job and success. I consider learning process to make our lives richer and more colorful. Of course it is not easy. I planned to learn many things every new year but ended up breaking my plans. Nevertheless, I will keep going. Thank for reading it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I agree with your opinion. Learning is a continuous process that will take place all our lives. Thank you for sharing.

~Elica~

I always think learning and attitude to learn important and it should continue even if we get older.

>>I always think learning and the attitude to learn are important and they should continue even if we get older.
In Korea we tend to think that after graduating from the high school, we do not have to study anymore.

>>In Korea, we tend to think that after graduating from high school, we don\'t have to study anymore.
But I think it is because we study for a good job and success.

>>I think it\'s because we study for a good job and success.
I consider learning process to make our lives richer and more colorful.

>>I consider learning as a process to make our lives richer and more colorful.
Of course it is not easy.

>>Of course, it isn\'t easy.

I planned to learn many things every new year but ended up breaking my plans.

>>I planned to learn many things every year but ended up breaking my plans.

Nevertheless, I will keep going.

>>Nevertheless, I will keep going.
Thank for reading it.

>>Thank you for reading it.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기