Learning a foreign language is easy when you are using computer.
학생이 쓴 원문
All the children must learn a foreign language.
Video is a good medium for learning a foreign language.
A good dictionary is indispensable for learning a foreign language.
How important is a perfect accent when speaking a foreign language?
But a second foreign language is of growing importance in this era of globalization.
thanks for reading.
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Good evening, [이름]. Thank you for practicing your writing and grammar skills. Nice work!^_^
Learning a foreign language is easy when you are using computer.
>>>Learning a foreign language is easy when you are using a computer.
All the children must learn a foreign language.
>>>Every children must learn a foreign language.
Video is a good medium for learning a foreign language.
Video is a good medium for learning a foreign language.
>>> A video is a good medium for learning a foreign language.
A good dictionary is indispensable for learning a foreign language.
A good dictionary is indispensable for learning a foreign language.
>>>CORRECT!
How important is a perfect accent when speaking a foreign language?
How important is a perfect accent when speaking a foreign language?
>>>CORRECT!
But a second foreign language is of growing importance in this era of globalization.
But a second foreign language is of growing importance in this era of globalization.
>>> But learning a second foreign language is having much importance in this era of globalization.
thanks for reading.
thanks for reading.
>>>Thanks for reading.
OR>>>Thank you for reading.
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