Learning English is good

2021-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I think learning English is good. Reason to think English is good because it benefit my foreign word and it help to read a book in another country. If I learn English my foreign word skill and also my English skill. And learning English help to read a book in another country. Because English is most popular word. that\'s the reason why I think learning English is good.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this.

I think learning English is good.
>>> correct   
Reason to think English is good because it benefit my foreign word and it help to read a book in another country.
>>> There are good reasons to learn English. It is beneficial in speaking to foreigners and it helps me read books from other countries.   
If I learn English my foreign word skill and also my English skill. 
>>> If I study English, I can improve on my vocabulary and speaking skills.   
And learning English help to read a book in another country. 
>>> And learning English helps to read books from another country.    
Because English is most popular word. 
>>> English is a very in demand language.
>>> OR: English is utilized in all parts of the world.  
>>> OR: English in the international language. 
that\'s the reason why I think learning English is good.
>>>  correct  

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