Learning English through virtual classes
학생이 쓴 원문
I had many experiences of using phone English classes to improve or maintain my skill in English. but looking back the past times that I\'ve studied on this platform, it\'s like the repeated failure of the study plan, for example, I started classes with a certain level of passion for learning, later on, I stopped the course with various reasons like becoming busier with work or discontinuing the momentum after just forgetting extending the class.
I know that continued passion with a stringent plan along with a good teacher is important to improve the skill in English, so I want to continue this momentum until I can clearly feel the difference in my level of English by improving it at least after 5 or 6 months time. Saying that, if my current teacher Annie agrees to my plan, and she also hopes to see the miracle of improvement from one of her students, I will extend my classes with this company over 6 months with belief in my plan and the commitment.
Please be part of this plan.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Learning English through Virtual Classes
I had many experiences of using phone English classes to improve or maintain my skill in English.
>>> I had a lot of experience having English classes on the phone to improve or maintain my skill in English.
but looking back the past times that I\'ve studied on this platform, it\'s like the repeated failure of the study plan,
>>> But looking back to those times that I\'ve studied on this platform, it\'s like a repeated failure of the study plan.
for example, I started classes with a certain level of passion for learning,
>>> For example, I started the class with a certain level of passion for learning.
later on, I stopped the course with various reasons like becoming busier with work or discontinuing the momentum after just forgetting extending the class.
>>> Later on, I stopped the course with various reasons like becoming busy with work or discontinuing the momentum after forgetting to extend the class.
I know that continued passion with a stringent plan along with a good teacher is important to improve the skill in English,
>>> I know that a continuous passion with a stringent plan along with a good teacher is important to improve the skill in English.
so I want to continue this momentum until I can clearly feel the difference in my level of English by improving it at least after 5 or 6 months time.
>>> So I want to continue this momentum until I can clearly feel the difference in my English level by improving at least after 5 or 6 months\' time.
Saying that, if my current teacher Annie agrees to my plan, and she also hopes to see the miracle of improvement from one of her students, I will extend my classes with this company over 6 months with belief in my plan and the commitment.
>>> Saying that, if my current teacher Annie agrees to my plan, and she also hopes to see the miracle of improvement from one of her students, then I will extend my class with this company over 6 months with a belief in my plan and the commitment.
Please be part of this plan.
>>> CORRECT
Note: [이름], I noticed that you like using commas too much and your sentences are too long. Break apart your sentences and use period please. Thanks!
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