Learning or practicing happiness
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Happiness can be learned or practiced. Even though you don\'t know what happiness is, you can learn what happiness is or find it with your friends, family, people around you, and even with your creations. And those who receive happiness learn how to practice happiness in the actions of others at the same time as they receive it.
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Happiness can be learned or practiced.
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Even though you don\'t know what happiness is, you can learn what happiness is or find it with your friends, family, people around you, and even with your creations.
>> Even if you don’t know what happiness is, you can discover it through your friends, family, the people around you, and even through your own creations.
OR >> Even if you don’t know what happiness is, you can discover it or learn about it through your friends, family, the people around you, and even through your own creations.
And those who receive happiness learn how to practice happiness in the actions of others at the same time as they receive it.
>> Those who experience happiness also learn how to practice it by observing the actions of others.
OR >> Those who experience happiness also learn how to practice it by observing the actions of others at the same time.
OR >> Those who experience happiness also learn how to practice it by observing the actions of others at the same time.
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