Lego ninjago
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I love lego. First time I see lego I was 6year old.That time I was love lego city.but then! I see really great thing!!!
Lego NINJAGO!!(It`s my greatest lego series!!)After that time ninjago is my favorite lego.So I buy them,and making them,and playing
them.(also remordeling) Because It`s ve~~~~ry cool, awsome,great And it has super great stories
How can anyone ever don`t like this??(My father dos.Because he said it`s expencive,but I don`t care)
Any way I like lego ninjago!!!!!!
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I love lego.
>> CORRECT!
First time I see lego I was 6year old.
>> I was 6 years old when I first saw Lego.
That time I was love lego city.
>> A that time I started to love Lego city.
but then! I see really great thing!!!
>> But then, I saw something greater.
Lego NINJAGO!!(It`s my greatest lego series!!)
>> It\'s the Lego Ninjago, it\'s my greatest Lego series.
After that time ninjago is my favorite lego.
>> Since then, Ninjago has become my favorite Lego series.
So I buy them,and making them,and playing them. (also remordeling)
>> So, I bought them and build, remodel and play them.
Because It`s ve~~~~ry cool, awsome,great And it has super great stories
>> Because it`s very cool, awesome and great. It also has very great stories.
How can anyone ever don`t like this??(My father dos.
>> How can anyone dislike it? My father does.
Because he said it`s expencive,but I don`t care)
>> Because he said it\'s expensive, but I don`t care.
Any way I like lego ninjago!!!!!!
>> Anyway, I like Lego Ninjago!
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