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2010-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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good afternoon. lei. from last night, i feel some uncomfortable with my stomach. and i suffer from migraine. so i was not able to wake up this morning. so i am off sick today. at around 10am, i went to hospital. the doctor told me i have an upset stomach. in my opinion, i ate a lot during last week. but don't worry. i feel better than morning. during on my way home from hospital, i feel it's like a early summer. the season changes without spring from winter to summer. because, last week was chilly so i need to wear a thick clothes.

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Hi [이름]!

As I told you earlier you don’t have to worry about your. Just concentrate on recovering from your sickness. Have some rest and hopefuilly tomorrow you will be feeling better. Thank you for our class today. You did pretty well. See you tomorrow.

Lei J

 

good afternoon. lei.

>>correct
from last night, i feel some uncomfortable with my stomach.

>>last night, I felt uncomfortable with my stomach

and i suffer from migraine.

>>and I am suffering from migraine

so i was not able to wake up this morning.

>>correct

so i am off sick today.

>>So I filed for a sick leave today

at around 10am, i went to hospital.

>>correct

the doctor told me i have an upset stomach.

>>correct

in my opinion, i ate a lot during last week.
>>in my opinion, I ate a lot last week

but don't worry. i feel better than morning.
>>but don’t worry, I feel better now

during on my way home from hospital, i feel it's like a early summer.

>>On my way home from the hospital, I feel like it’s already early summer

the season changes without spring from winter to summer.

>>correct

because, last week was chilly so i need to wear a thick clothes.

>>correct

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