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2010-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good morning. how are you? I feel better than yesterday. I was able to sleep yesterday.^ ^ as by magic, as soon as i departed from company. i wasn't tired any longer. ^ ^ i am on translating an agreement. it is a sample of personnel agreement. my boss gave the agreement and made me translate it for my studying. when i got the task, i feel good. he concerned about my study so he gave it to me. but it is not easy task. there are lots of difficult sentences. the structure are difficult to translate. because there are lots of law expressions. anyways, i hope to finish it soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] dear!! Wow, it's nice to know that your boss is actually showing concerns about your studies!! What he did is actually a great help for you to improve your writing and vocabulary. When you meet some terms that are not familiar, try to look it up from the dictionary, that way you could improve your vocabulary. Always remember [이름] that I am always here to assist you. Just don't hesitate to ask me. See you later!! Lei J Good morning. >> correct How are you?>> correct I feel better than yesterday >> correct I was able to sleep yesterday>> correct as by magic, as soon as I departed from company, I wasn't tired any longer >> like a magic, as soon as I departed from my company, I don't feel tired anymore I am on translating an agreement. >> I am working on translating an agreement It is a sample personnel agreement. >> correct my boss gave the agreement and made me translate it for my studying. >> my boss gave me an agreement and had me translate it for my studies when I got the task, i feel good. >> I felt good when I got the task he concerned about my study so he gave it to me. >>he was concerned about my studies so he gave me the task. but it is not task. >> correct there are lots of difficult sentences. >>there are also lots of difficult sentences in the agreement the structures are difficult to translate. >> correct because there are lots of expressions. >> correct anyways I hope to finish it soon >> correct

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