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2010-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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i was absent from work last friday. because i had a stomache. so i was not able to have a class with you last friday. i suffered from gastritis, indigestion and pain of shoulder for the last several months. so i decided to have a gastro photography. last autumn, i had take a gastro photography. and the doctor told me the factor of pain is most come from stress. and i think i suffered from this pain stress, too. yes, also the doctor's diagnosis was stress, too. i got the prescription and had a madicine for two weeks.

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Good Job   I was absent from work last friday.>>correctbecause i had a stomachache.>>correctso i was not able to have a class with you last friday.>>correcti suffered from gastritis, indigestion and pain of shoulder for the past months. >>correctso i decided to have a gastro photography. >>correctlast autumn, i had a gastro photography. >>correctand the doctor told me the factor of pain which most because stress. >>correctand i think i suffered from this pain stress, too. >>correctyes, also the doctor's diagnosis was stress, too.>>correcti got the prescription and I have to take medicine for two weeks.>>correct

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