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학생이 쓴 원문
and after enjoying the beach, we went to see a movie.
my friend and i had a betting for choosing the movie. i wanted to see Korean adventure but my friend wanted to see a Korean horror movie.
i don't like to see a horror movie. and i always avoid to see it.
but,ㅠ ㅠ i loose at the betting.
so i went to see the horror movie. the story was about high school. it was very cruel. i was not able to open my eyes during the movie.
after the movie, my freind made a promise. never see the horror movie again.
anyways i enjoyed my first day of vacation. ^ ^
강사 첨삭
and after enjoying the beach, we went to see a movie.
>>and after having a great time at the beach, we went to see a movie.
>>and after having a great time at the beach, we went to see a movie.
my friend and i had a betting for choosing the movie.
>>my friend and I had a bet for choosing the movie
i wanted to see a Korean adventure but my friend wanted to see a Korean horror movie.
>>correct
>>correct
i don't like to see a horror movie.
>>I don't like watching horror movies
and i always avoid to see it.
>>correct
but, i loose at the betting.
>>but I lost
>>but I lost
so i went to see the horror movie.
>>correct
the story was about high school.
>>correct
it was very cruel.
>>correct
i was not able to open my eyes during the movie.
>>correct
>>correct
after the movie, my friend made a promise.
>>correct
To never watch a horror movie again.
>>correct
>>correct
anyways i enjoyed my first day of vacation. ^ ^
>>correct
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