Lei.~ ^ ^
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Hi [이름]!!! How are you?!?! I missed you so much..I am really excited to talk to you..See you later.
Lei J
Good morning lei.
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How are you?
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Long time no hear your voice.
>>It's been a long time that I haven't heard your voice.
I miss you.
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During the past time, Many things were changed.
>>Many things have changed.
Our last class was 17,Aug,2010.
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Time flies very quickly.
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During the time, I changed my position.
>>During that time, I had another position.
I was the secretary of our yard general manager.
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When I was at that position, I studied English with you. ^ ^
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I wanted to change my position for growing my capability.
>>I wanted to change my position to improve my capability.
In Shipbuilding company, there is a team which title is Contract Administration.
>>In a ship bouilding company, there was this team which is titled as Contract Administration.
The team has function to control between ship owner and shipyard.
>>The teams functions to have a control between the ship owner and the shipyard.
I wanted to join that team.
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but I don't have proper competence.
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Our company wants to member of the team that is Fluent English, graduaated from university(It means the guy should have a degree.),
>>Our company wants to have a member who is fluent in English and a university graduate.
score of Toeic( more than 700).
>>also they want the person to have a TOEIC score of 700.
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