lei ^ ^

2010-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I didn't have any of requirement. I just dreamed about the position. But unexpectedly, one of employee at the team quit the job.Our company had no counterplan. Then head of the team suggested to replace me instead of the employee. due to the reason, I could get the chance of chaging my position. I work at a CA team. I have many chance to talk with foreigner and face lots of English letter. The weakness is that i have no time to study during work. Whenever I met a problem in speaking English, I thought I should start again my class with you. ^ ^ I am waiting our class. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

I didn't have any of requirement. >>I didn't meet any of the requirements. I just dreamed about the position.>>correct But unexpectedly, one of employee at the team quit the job. >>But one of the team members quit his job unexpectedly. Our company had no counterplan. >>correct Then head of the team suggested to replace me instead of the employee.>>Then the team leader suggested for me to replace the employee. due to the reason, I could get the chance of chaging my position.>>That's why my position changed. I work at a CA team. >>I work for the CA team now. I have many chances to talk with foreigners and face lots of English letters.>>correct The weakness is that i have no time to study during work. >>The bad part is that I no longer have time to study English at work. Whenever I met a problem in speaking English, I thought I should start again my class with you.^^ >>Whenever I had a problem speaking in English, I thought of starting to have class with you again. I am waiting our class. >>I am waiting for our class. See you soon. >>correct

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