Lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning.
How are you?
I am a little bit tired because i could not have a sound sleep last night. I came back home at around 10 PM. I should finish to write my c/v and cover paper in English. It was very hard to me.
I finished it this morning and gave it to my closed friend who is a foreigner. After checking by him I will submit my papers to the company.
I am going to have a lunch at outside. maybe i will not answer your call.
See you~
I should go now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Okay, enjoy your lunch okay. But as you already know I will still try to call your mobile phone since you were not able to delay our class. Take care.
Lei J
Good morning.
>>correct
How are you?
>>correct
I am a little bit tired because i could not have a sound sleep last night.
>>I am a little bit tired because I wasn't able to have a sound sleep last night.
I came back home at around 10 PM.
>>I went home at around 10 PM.
I should finish writing my c/v and cover paper in English.
>>correct
It was very hard for me to finish it.
>>correct
I finished it this morning and gave it to my close friend who is a foreigner.
>>correct
After checking it with him I will submit my papers to the company.
>>correct
I am going to have a lunch at outside.
>>correct
maybe i will not be able to answer your call.
>>correct
See you~
>>correct
I should go now.
>>correct
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