Lei.~

2010-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good morning. How are you? I am a little bit tired because i could not have a sound sleep last night. I came back home at around 10 PM. I should finish to write my c/v and cover paper in English. It was very hard to me. I finished it this morning and gave it to my closed friend who is a foreigner. After checking by him I will submit my papers to the company. I am going to have a lunch at outside. maybe i will not answer your call. See you~ I should go now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Okay, enjoy your lunch okay. But as you already know I will still try to call your mobile phone since you were not able to delay our class. Take care. Lei J   Good morning. >>correct How are you? >>correct I am a little bit tired because i could not have a sound sleep last night. >>I am a little bit tired because I wasn't able to have a sound sleep last night. I came back home at around 10 PM. >>I went home at around 10 PM. I should finish writing my c/v and cover paper in English. >>correct It was very hard for me to finish it. >>correct I finished it this morning and gave it to my close friend who is a foreigner. >>correct After checking it with him I will submit my papers to the company. >>correct I am going to have a lunch at outside. >>correct maybe i will not be able to answer your call. >>correct See you~ >>correct I should go now. >>correct

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