Lei!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2011-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hello Lei.;) I'm really sorry to hear that your country happened earthquake. We happen a little earthquake. If earthquake happen, we don't practically feel it. But Japan happen earthquake very often. Anyway, Be careful dear. T.T Here are additional answers. I thought until 16 years if I want , I can do anything. So I had a lot of dreamjob. But now my dream job is very limited. The sad thing is that I gradually think how can I make much money not what do I want to be in the future. Actually, I had a lot of part time job. I have experienced to work at department, coffee house, drink house, restaurant, medical supplier company and a bakery and so on. I grew up with the hard way. Anyway, I hope there is no more earthquake. Enjoy your weekend. :)

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Hi [이름]!! Thank you so much for your concern dear, but do not worry I'm okay. I just hope that there will be no more earthquake incidents in our country. Have a great weekend and take care!!! See you on Monday!!! Stay Happy!!! Lei J   Hello Lei.;) >>correct I'm really sorry to hear that your country happened earthquake. >>I'm really sorry to hear that you had an earthquake in your country. We happen a little earthquake. >>We don't experience earthquakes that often. If an earthquake happen, we don't practically feel it. >>correct But Japan happen earthquake very often. >>But Japan experience earthquakes very often. Anyway, Be careful dear. T.T >>correct Here are additional answers. >>Here are my additional answers. I thought until 16 years if I want , I can do anything. >>I thought until I became 16 years old, I can do anything that I want. So I had a lot of dream jobs. >>correct But now my dream job is very limited. >>correct The sad thing is that I gradually think how can I make much money not what do I want to be in the future. >>correct Actually, I had a lot of part time jobs. >>correct I have experienced to work at department store, coffee house, drink house, restaurant, medical supplier company and a bakery and so on. >>correct I grew up with the hard way. >>I grew up the hard way. Anyway, I hope there is no more earthquake. >>Anyways, I hope your country will no longer experience earthquakes. Enjoy your weekend. :) >>correct

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