Lei!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Lei.;)
I'm really sorry to hear that your country happened earthquake.
We happen a little earthquake.
If earthquake happen, we don't practically feel it.
But Japan happen earthquake very often.
Anyway, Be careful dear. T.T
Here are additional answers.
I thought until 16 years if I want , I can do anything.
So I had a lot of dreamjob.
But now my dream job is very limited.
The sad thing is that I gradually think how can I make much money not what do I want to be in the future.
Actually, I had a lot of part time job.
I have experienced to work at department, coffee house, drink house, restaurant, medical supplier company and a bakery and so on.
I grew up with the hard way.
Anyway, I hope there is no more earthquake.
Enjoy your weekend. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!! Thank you so much for your concern dear, but do not worry I'm okay. I just hope that there will be no more earthquake incidents in our country. Have a great weekend and take care!!! See you on Monday!!! Stay Happy!!!
Lei J
Hello Lei.;)
>>correct
I'm really sorry to hear that your country happened earthquake.
>>I'm really sorry to hear that you had an earthquake in your country.
We happen a little earthquake.
>>We don't experience earthquakes that often.
If an earthquake happen, we don't practically feel it.
>>correct
But Japan happen earthquake very often.
>>But Japan experience earthquakes very often.
Anyway, Be careful dear. T.T
>>correct
Here are additional answers.
>>Here are my additional answers.
I thought until 16 years if I want , I can do anything.
>>I thought until I became 16 years old, I can do anything that I want.
So I had a lot of dream jobs.
>>correct
But now my dream job is very limited.
>>correct
The sad thing is that I gradually think how can I make much money not what do I want to be in the future.
>>correct
Actually, I had a lot of part time jobs.
>>correct
I have experienced to work at department store, coffee house, drink house, restaurant, medical supplier company and a bakery and so on.
>>correct
I grew up with the hard way.
>>I grew up the hard way.
Anyway, I hope there is no more earthquake.
>>Anyways, I hope your country will no longer experience earthquakes.
Enjoy your weekend. :)
>>correct
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