Lei~
학생이 쓴 원문
Um... I'm in dormitory of my school.
For about 5months, I'll stay here.
Actually I'm worrying about my phone English because in my room, there are three more people.
Honestly, I'm afraid for other people to listen my poor English.
That's why my voice was so small today^^
So I think I should find another good place to have my phone English class with comfortable mind.
Anyway thankyou for teaching me and have a nice day!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!!
Dont be afraid to show your capabilities to other people, specially communicating using English language. I told you before not to underestimate yourself. You are actually doing well. All that you need to do is to boost your confidence. Just be yourself and give your best in everything that you do. AJA!!
Lei J
Um... I'm in dormitory of my school.
>>I am staying at the schools dormitory.For about 5months, I'll stay here.
>>I will stay here for about 5 months.Actually I'm worrying about my phone English because in my room, there are three more people.
>>Actually I worry about my phone English class because there are other 3 people staying in my room.Honestly, I'm afraid for other people to listen my poor English.
>>Honestly, I am afraid that other people listen to my poor English skills.That's why my voice was so small today^^>>Thats why my voice was quite low today.So I think I should find another good place to have my phone English class with comfortable mind.>>So I think I need to look for a good place where I could have phone English class wherein I could be comfortable.Anyway thankyou for teaching me and have a nice day!!
>>Anyways, thank you for teaching me and have a nice day!!
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