LEI-
학생이 쓴 원문
HI-
Today class was so good- :) and fuuny-
l did't know that you're crist-
Honetly l did't tell you that i am crist. that's why some people don't like that chist .ㅠ...
That;s why l am not drinkin achole- :)
anyway we have a same interesting-ㅋ
why did't you tell me yasterday that today is your birthday yasterday~
all most korea girls say that on the people around her before she's birthday-
so we are preparing to congratuation- :)
i hope you have a great time today-
because your work, you can't hold the party today- is'nt it?
don't be sad ㅠㅠ
you have a so many friend, family ,boy friends~
you have all the happiest thing already - :)
english skill too- ㅋㅋㅋ
ok- anyway-
say again- congratuation lei-
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim!!
Thank you!! Honestly, among my students, you are the only one who knew that today is my birthday!! I don't know, maybe because you are so good to me. Thanks again for singing me a song. I didn't expect it!! I am overwhelmed. You're a sweet guy. Don't ever be ashamed of telling other people that you're a Christian!! Always, be proud of yourself. Have a great day!! Thank you so much.
Regards,
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HI- Today class was so good- :) and fuuny->>Today's class went well.
l did't know that you're crist->>I didn't know that you're a Christian.
Honetly l did't tell you that i am crist.
>>Honestly I don't want to tell you that I'm a christian
that's why some people don't like that chist .ㅠ...>>Because some people don't like Christians.
That;s why l am not drinkin achole- :)>>That's why I don't drink alcohol.
anyway we have a same interesting-ㅋ>>Anyways, we have similar interests.
why did't you tell me yasterday that today is your birthday yasterday~>>Why didn't you tell me yesterday that today is your birthday.
all most korea girls say that on the people around her before she's birthday- >>Almost all Korean girls inform people around them before her birthday
so we are preparing to congratuation- :)>>So we could prepare and congratulate them.
i hope you have a great time today->>correct
because your work, you can't hold the party today- is'nt it?>>Because of your work, you can't hold a party today, right?
don't be sad ㅠㅠ>>correct
you have a so many friend, family ,boy friends~>>you have a lot of friends, family and a boyfriend
you have all the happiest thing already - :) >>You have all the things that can make you happy
english skill too- ㅋㅋㅋ>>Good English skill too
ok- anyway-
>>correct
say again- congratuation lei-
>>again, congratulations lei!!
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