LEI-

2010-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

HI- Today class was so good- :) and fuuny- l did't know that you're crist- Honetly l did't tell you that i am crist. that's why some people don't like that chist .ㅠ... That;s why l am not drinkin achole- :) anyway we have a same interesting-ㅋ why did't you tell me yasterday that today is your birthday yasterday~ all most korea girls say that on the people around her before she's birthday- so we are preparing to congratuation- :) i hope you have a great time today- because your work, you can't hold the party today- is'nt it? don't be sad ㅠㅠ you have a so many friend, family ,boy friends~ you have all the happiest thing already - :) english skill too- ㅋㅋㅋ ok- anyway- say again- congratuation lei-

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim!! Thank you!! Honestly, among my students, you are the only one who knew that today is my birthday!! I don't know, maybe because you are so good to me. Thanks again for singing me a song. I didn't expect it!! I am overwhelmed. You're a sweet guy. Don't ever be ashamed of telling other people that you're a Christian!! Always, be proud of yourself. Have a great day!! Thank you so much. Regards, [이름]   HI- Today class was so good- :) and fuuny->>Today's class went well. l did't know that you're crist->>I didn't know that you're a Christian. Honetly l did't tell you that i am crist. >>Honestly I don't want to tell you that I'm a christian that's why some people don't like that chist .ㅠ...>>Because some people don't like Christians. That;s why l am not drinkin achole- :)>>That's why I don't drink alcohol. anyway we have a same interesting-ㅋ>>Anyways, we have similar interests. why did't you tell me yasterday that today is your birthday yasterday~>>Why didn't you tell me yesterday that today is your birthday. all most korea girls say that on the people around her before she's birthday- >>Almost all Korean girls inform people around them before her birthday so we are preparing to congratuation- :)>>So we could prepare and congratulate them. i hope you have a great time today->>correct because your work, you can't hold the party today- is'nt it?>>Because of your work, you can't hold a party today, right? don't be sad ㅠㅠ>>correct you have a so many friend, family ,boy friends~>>you have a lot of friends, family and a boyfriend you have all the happiest thing already - :) >>You have all the things that can make you happy english skill too- ㅋㅋㅋ>>Good English skill too ok- anyway- >>correct say again- congratuation lei- >>again, congratulations lei!!

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