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2010-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

hi- today class was so funny-:) tomorrow class will be our last class...ㅠㅡㅠ.. it's really sad.. making a native speaker is a wonderful things..i know this time. i can learn so many tings from you that i'll never learn in the korea. i think it's a very good point to make a native. really really thank you- when i remember you,i'd listen to our record.- and i can't forget you because your my first native teacher. honestly i am little get worried about go aborod..as you know it's cost so expensive and i have to leave my home and frinds for an year. i know it'll be difficult time- but i don't regret it.cause it's my decition. lei- really thank you- see you-

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim! I really feel sad that we are about to end our classes. On the other hand, I am happy because I can see the results of your hardships upon studying English. I know that traveling alone is difficult specially if it is your first time to do so, but it could be fun too. You will learn how to be independent and face challenges alone. I know, because I’ve been independent from my family for years already. Just keep on practicing and applying your English skills because that will be a big help for you to improve. Stay happy Kim. I will miss you. Lei J   hi-today class was so funny-:)>>Today’s class was so funny-:)tomorrow class will be our last class...ㅠㅡㅠ.. >>tomorrow will be our last class togetherit's really sad..>>correctmaking a native speaker is a wonderful things.. >>meeting a native speaker is a wonderful thing i know this time.>>correcti can learn so many tings from you that i'll never learn in the korea.>> I learned many things from you that I’ll never learn in Korea.i think it's a very good point to make a native.>>I think it’s good that I’ve met a native speaker like youreally, really, thank you->>correctwhen i remember you,i'd listen to our record.->>I listen to our recording whenever I remember youand i can't forget you because your my first native teacher.>> and I will never forget you because you are my first native teacher.honestly i am little get worried about go aborod.. >>honestly, I am a little worried about going abroad, as you know it's cost so expensive and i have to leave my home and frinds for an year.>>as you know, it is very expensive and I have to leave my home and friends for a yeari know it'll be difficult time- but i don't regret it.cause it's my decition. >>I know it will be difficult, but I won’t regret it because it is my decision lei- really thank you- see you- >>correct    

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