lei~ are you okay?

2010-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nicole

학생이 쓴 원문

I heard about you from verna. Where do you ache? maybe are you coming down with a cold? I hope you get well soon. You don't be sorry. anyway, I wanted to talk about my holiday. It was nice. Even though the heavy rain hit our peninsula I had a good time with my family and friends except a Gyeonggi family, a thirth brother of my father, did not come my house because of the heavy rain. It's chilly today. It feels like a fall. I wore a stockings for the first time. Take care lei~~ oh my! could you say thanks to verna for me? She was kind to me. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]J Thank you for the concern and sorry to hear that you had a rainy holiday but it’s great that you enjoyed the time with your family and friends. I hope that your father’s brother is good despite of the bad weather. I will relay the message to Verna. Have a great weekend. J   I heard about you from verna. >> I heard about you from Verna.Where do you ache? maybe are you coming down with a cold? >> What’s ailing? Maybe you’ll have cold?I hope you get well soon.>>Correct You don't be sorry.>> Don’t feel sorry.anyway, I wanted to talk about my holiday. It was nice.>> Anyway, I wanted to talk about my holiday. It was nice.Even though the heavy rain hit our peninsula I had a good time with my family and friends except a Gyeonggi family, a thirth brother of my father, did not come my house because of the heavy rain.>> Even though the heavy rain hit our peninsula, I had a good time with my family and friends except the third brother of my father who is from  Gyeonggi, was not able to come over  due to  heavy rain.It's chilly today. >> Correct It feels like a fall. >> Seems like its fall.I wore a stockings for the first time.>> I wore stockings for the first time.Take care lei~~oh my! could you say thanks to verna for me?>>Oh my! Could you say thanks to Verna for me?She was kind to me. ^^ >>Correct

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