lei.~ it's me [이름].~^ ^
학생이 쓴 원문
Lei.~ good moring. wow it's already a lunch time.
i'm dying for hunger. because i didn't have any meal since two days ago. i have attacked with an indigestion. in spite of i quited the meal, i think i still have an indigetion. ㅠ ㅠ
but i am going to eat from this lunch. it's not good have a lot of eating after fasting. so i prepared gruel for my lunch.
during the fasting, at first days' dinner i could stand it. but at the second days' dinner, i couldn't stop to think about food. i had a lot of want to eat. anyways, i wish the pain from the gastritis and indigestion will be stop. it's terrible.
take care of yourself too. when you got stress from anyting. it's easy to get a stomache problem.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Well it’s nice to hear that you ware feeling better now. Try to follow your mom’s advise. Try to free yourself from worries. Cheer up okay. See you again tomorrow.
Lei J
Lei.~ good moring. wow it's already a lunch time. >>Lei good morning. Wow it’s already lunch time
i'm dying for hunger.
>>I’m dying because of hunger
because i didn't have any meal since two days ago.
>>correct
i have attacked with an indigestion.
>>I had an indigestion attack
in spite of i quited the meal, i think i still have an indigetion. ㅠ ㅠ>>I already quit eating a meal, but still I am having indigestion
but i am going to eat from this lunch.
>>But I am going to eat lunch today
it's not good have a lot of eating after fasting.
>>correct
so i prepared gruel for my lunch. >>correct
during the fasting, at first days' dinner i could stand it.
>>correct
but at the second days' dinner, i couldn't stop to think about food.
>>but during the second day, I couldn’t stop thinking about food
i had a lot of want to eat.
>>I want to eat a lot
anyways, i wish the pain from the gastritis and indigestion will be stop.
>> anyways, i wish the pain from the gastritis and indigestion will stop soon
it's terrible. >>correct
take care of yourself too.
>>correct
when you got stress from anyting.
>>when you’re stressed about something
it's easy to get a stomache problem.
>>you are prone on having a stomachache
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