lei.~ it's me [이름].~^ ^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good moring.~
Hi.~ with your concerned for me, i feel good today.
my stomach work normally. ^ ^ so i am able to eat whatever i want.~
but i need to be careful. i need to control for eating. sometimes, i ten to overeat for release my stress. i must keep in mind whati was attacked with an indigetion! anyways, it's a friday again. i like a friday neverthless i have to work until saturday. ^ ^
this weekend, my main plan is studying prepare for my examination. but on saturday, i need to attend the meeting which is picnic with my team member. we are going to the beach and playing soccer. also we are going to have a lunch at outside. to be honestly, i don't want to attend the meeting. because, i had another plan for saturday. anyways, it's a good oppotunity to close with my team members.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Good morning!! It’s nice to hear that you are no longer suffering from indigestion!! That’s a good news! Well I hope to hear more about your weekend plans during our class. See you!!
Lei J
Good morning.~
>>correctHi.~with your concerned for me, i feel good today. >>Hi, I am feeling good today!
my stomach work normally. ^ ^
>>my stomach works normally now
so i am able to eat whatever i want.~>>correct
but i need to be careful.
>>correct
i need to control for eating.
>>I need to control what I eat
sometimes, i ten to overeat for release my stress.
>>sometimes, I tend to overeat to release my stress
i must keep in mind whati was attacked with an indigetion!
>>But I must keep it in my mind that I always have indigestion
anyways, it's a friday again.
>>correct
i like a friday neverthless i have to work until saturday. ^ ^>>I like Fridays, but I have to go to work until this Saturday
this weekend, my main plan is studying prepare for my examination.
>>for this weekend, my main plan is to study and prepare for my examination
but on saturday, i need to attend the meeting which is picnic with my team member.
>>But I need to attend a picnic meeting with my team members
we are going to the beach and playing soccer.
>>we are going to the beach and play soccer
also we are going to have a lunch at outside.
>>and also, we are going to have a lunch out
to be honestly, i don't want to attend the meeting.
>>honestly, I don’t want to attend the meeting
because, i had another plan for saturday.
>>because I already set a plan for Saturday
anyways, it's a good oppotunity to close with my team members.
>>anyways, it’s a good opportunity for me to become close with my team members
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