lei.~ it's me [이름].~^ ^

2010-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 abegail

학생이 쓴 원문

Good moring.~ Hi.~ with your concerned for me, i feel good today. my stomach work normally. ^ ^ so i am able to eat whatever i want.~ but i need to be careful. i need to control for eating. sometimes, i ten to overeat for release my stress. i must keep in mind whati was attacked with an indigetion! anyways, it's a friday again. i like a friday neverthless i have to work until saturday. ^ ^ this weekend, my main plan is studying prepare for my examination. but on saturday, i need to attend the meeting which is picnic with my team member. we are going to the beach and playing soccer. also we are going to have a lunch at outside. to be honestly, i don't want to attend the meeting. because, i had another plan for saturday. anyways, it's a good oppotunity to close with my team members.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Good morning!! It’s nice to hear that you are no longer suffering from indigestion!! That’s a good news! Well I hope to hear more about your weekend plans during our class. See you!! Lei J Good morning.~ >>correctHi.~with your concerned for me, i feel good today. >>Hi, I am feeling good today! my stomach work normally. ^ ^ >>my stomach works normally now so i am able to eat whatever i want.~>>correct but i need to be careful. >>correct i need to control for eating. >>I need to control what I eat sometimes, i ten to overeat for release my stress. >>sometimes, I tend to overeat to release my stress i must keep in mind whati was attacked with an indigetion! >>But I must keep it in my mind that I always have indigestion anyways, it's a friday again. >>correct i like a friday neverthless i have to work until saturday. ^ ^>>I like Fridays, but I have to go to work until this Saturday this weekend, my main plan is studying prepare for my examination. >>for this weekend, my main plan is to study and prepare for my examination but on saturday, i need to attend the meeting which is picnic with my team member. >>But I need to attend a picnic meeting with my team members we are going to the beach and playing soccer. >>we are going to the beach and play soccer also we are going to have a lunch at outside. >>and also, we are going to have a lunch out to be honestly, i don't want to attend the meeting. >>honestly, I don’t want to attend the meeting because, i had another plan for saturday.   >>because I already set a plan for Saturday anyways, it's a good oppotunity to close with my team members. >>anyways, it’s a good opportunity for me to become close with my team members

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