Lei! It's me [이름]

2011-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Lei! Maybe you are eating a meal by this time Here are additional answers 1) I told you I chat with my friends when I'm so happy By the way I chat with my friends everyday So.. I Think I'm happy everyday =) 2) I want to go to Venice (ofcourse included Boracay kkk) Because I heard that Venice is so exotic and beautiful country And I would like to see a mask festival Anyway I will take a rest over there I call it "comma" It means comma of life, as it is time of recharge And I really want to go Boracay I heard the place is a very famous honeymoon resort Is it right? Have a good X100 day See you tomorrow Lei =)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Thank you for this composition. I am so proud of you, as you can see there are only a few revisions that I made. Keep it up. And by the way we also have a mask festival here in the Philippines called 밠asskara Festival?in Bacolod the only place in the Philippines where people speak Spanish. Oh we can talk about it tomorrow. See you dear have fun!! Lei J   Hello Lei! >>correct Maybe you are eating a meal by this time >>correct >>Maybe you are having your lunch at this time. Here are additional answers >>Here are my additional answers. 1) I told you I chat with my friends when I'm so happy >>correct By the way I chat with my friends everyday >>correct So.. I Think I'm happy everyday =) >>correct 2) I want to go to Venice (of course included Boracay kkk) >>I want to go to Venice (and of course Boracay is also included) Because I heard that Venice is so exotic and beautiful country >>correct And I would like to see a mask festival >>correct Anyway I will take a rest over there >>correct I call it "comma" >>correct It means comma of life, as it is time of recharge >>It means a comma for life, as it is the time to recharge our energy. And I really want to go Boracay >>And I really want to go to Boracay. I heard the place is a very famous honeymoon resort >>I heard that the place is very famous for honeymoon resorts. Is it right? >>correct Have a good X100 day >>correct See you tomorrow Lei =) >>correct

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