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2010-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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and today, suddenly i wanted to see the movie alone. have you ever see the movie alone? yes i did. i had tried it in 2008. it was special experience. so, i am going to see the SALT. do you know the movie? the main actress is Angelina Joly. i will tell you about the movie tommorrow. i can't wait our class. ^ ^ P.S i am sorry for long composition. during the last week, i am lazy student. i am regret about my behavior. please understand me. See u~~

강사 첨삭

and today, suddenly i wanted to see a movie alone.
>>correct

have you ever see the movie alone?

>>have you ever tried seeing a movie alone?
yes i did.

>>yes I have.

i had tried it in 2008. it was special experience.

>>I have tried it last 2008, and it was a special experience
so, i am going to see SALT.
>>correct

do you know the movie?
>>correct

the main actress in this movie is Angelina Jolie.
>>correct

i will tell you about the movie tomorrow.
>>correct

i can't wait our class. ^ ^
>>I can't wait for our class

P.S i am sorry for long composition.
>>I am really sorry for my very long composition

during the last week, i am lazy student.
>>last week, I was so lazy

i am regret about my behavior.
>>and I regret my behavior

please understand me.
>>correct

See u~~

>>correct

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