Lei~ Oh my god monday kkkk

2011-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Lei I enjoyed every minute on the phone with you I don't know why you make me happy Maybe it is your talent I think students enllored in your course will be the same as me I made English composition Please correct any mistasks My boyfriend had level test last week from you He said it was so pleasant for him to talk with you He checked his result of level test he siad, "I can't believe it!" Now, he is considering enrolling Power English My boyfriend will leave in Kwang Ju soon He will go to Seoul Because he is going to transfer another university He is packing to moving right now So, my longing to see him become stronger But l'm not worried Because I trust him and he is the same as me I'm going to go to school in order to listen my TOEIC class Have a great day lei

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Hi [이름]!!! OMGM!!! Thank you for the sweet comments dear. I feel the same way with you too. You always cheer me up and never missed to make me laugh and smile. Always be cheerful. See you tomorrow dear!!! Lei J   Lei~ Oh my god monday kkkk >>Lei, Oh My God It's Monday (OMGM)! Lei I enjoyed every minute on the phone with you >>Lei I enjoy every minute talking on the phone with you. I don't know why you make me happy. >>correct Maybe it is your talent. >>correct I think students enllored in your course will be the same as me I made English composition >>I think students who enrolled to your classes have the same reaction as I make this composition. Please correct any mistasks. >>Please correct any mistakes. My boyfriend had level test last week from you >>My boyfriend had his level test with you last week. He said it was so pleasant for him to talk with you >>He said he had a pleasant time talking with you. He checked his result of level test he said, "I can't believe it!" >>He checked his level test results and he said, I can't believe it! Now, he is considering enrolling Power English >>Now he is considering enrolling at Power English. My boyfriend will leave Kwang Ju soon >>correct He will go to Seoul >>correct Because he is going to transfer another university. >>correct He is packing to moving right now >>He is currently packing his things. >>He is starting to pack his things now. So, my longing to see him become stronger >>So my longing for him becomes stronger. >>So my longing for him becomes more intense. But l'm not worried. >>correct Because I trust him and he is the same as me >>Because I trust him and he does the same to me. I'm going to go to school in order to listen my TOEIC class >>I'm going to my school to listen to my TOEIC class. Have a great day lei >>correct

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