Lent my AirPods to my brother

2024-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I have a older brother. My brother borrowed my AirPods, lately. It\'s because he lost his AirPods a long time ago. So, I just allowed to borrow it. One day, I wanted to use my Airpods to watch Youtude videos. However, he didn\'t give it back to me. I said \"Give me.\" about 10 times, but he didn\'t. So, I stealed it and decided to don\'t lent AirPods to my brother again.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I have a older brother.

>> I have an older brother.
My brother borrowed my AirPods, lately.

>> Correct
It\'s because he lost his AirPods a long time ago.

>> Correct
So, I just allowed to borrow it.

>> So, I just allowed him to borrow it.
One day, I wanted to use my Airpods to watch Youtude videos.

>> One day, I wanted to use my Airpods to watch YouTube videos.
However, he didn\'t give it back to me.

>> However, he didn\'t give them back to me.
I said \"Give me.\" about 10 times, but he didn\'t.

>> I told him to give them back to me about 10 times, but he didn\'t.
So, I stealed it and decided to don\'t lent AirPods to my brother again.

>> So, I secretly took them back and decided not to lend my AirPods to my brother again.

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