Lesson 1 : Essay Question
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, we have a day of Lunar New Year\'s Day(설날) and Korean Thanksgiving Day (추석). So every family meets in Seoul and eat dinner together. Then there first greeting ment is \"Do you well on the test?, Do you get a scholarship, Do you get great rank?\".
I get stressed because they talk too much about studying.
This is my annoys kind of greeting..
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ella. I understand where you are coming from. In my case, they always ask me \"When are you getting married?\" or \"When do you plan to have kids?\". I wish people just mind their own business.
In Korea, we have a day of Lunar New Year\'s Day(설날) and Korean Thanksgiving Day (추석).
>>> correct
>>> OR: In Korea, we have holidays which are called Lunar New Year\'s Day and Korean Thanksgiving Day .
So every family meets in Seoul and eat dinner together.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So all family members meet in Seoul and eat dinner together.
Then there first greeting ment is \"Do you well on the test?, Do you get a scholarship, Do you get great rank?\".
>>> Then their first greetings are asking questions like \"Did you do well on the test?\", \"Did you get a scholarship?\", or \"Did you get a great rank?\".
I get stressed because they talk too much about studying.
>>> correct
This is my annoys kind of greeting..
>>> This is the kind of greeting I am annoyed with.
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