lesson 1 homework

2022-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

1. conversation We were engaged in conversation today morning. 2. presence Showing one\'s presence is important in our life . 3. verbally We verbally promised not to be late.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름] Ju! It\'s great to see you here on this page!

Thank you so much for taking time and effort in answering your homework! I can see below that you can construct very good sentences with depth and careful thought. There are minute suggestions I made to sentences 1 and 2. Please read and study them carefully.

This activity is meant to hone your grammar accuracy so that when you speak, you can edit yourself, memorize these patterns, and make it more spontaneous for you to use them in daily conversations. A job well done!

See you again here on this page and in class next week. Keep safe.

-T. Donna =)

1. conversation
We were engaged in conversation today morning.
>> We were engaged in conversation this morning.
Or: We were engaged in conversation today.

2. presence
Showing one\'s presence is important in our life .
>> Showing one\'s presence is important in our lives.
Or: Showing one\'s presence is important in life.

3. verbally
We verbally promised not to be late.
>> Correct!

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