lesson 10 First Impression
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Expressing your thoughts through writing is one way for you to improve your ability.
You are really doing your best to improve yourself. Keep it up!
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My manager\'s name is Junghwan-Jo and we\'ve known each other for 1 year.
>> Correct!
He has been working at this company for more than 10 years.
>> He has been working in this company for more than 10 years.
He is married with one kid.
>> Correct!
He loves his kid.
>> Correct!
And he also loves a dog like a son.
>>And he also loves his dog like a son.^^
As for his look, he has curly and black hair, and wears glasses.
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As for his looks/appearance, he has a curly black hair and he wears glasses.
When it comes to work, he can be very demanding and strict, but he always tries to be fair.
>> Correct!
His leadership style is very easy to work with and he has a good sense of humor.
>> Correct!
That\'s why the all team members like him.
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That\'s why all the team members like him.
Overall, I\'d say he is an understanding and caring boss.
※ oh.. I\'m sorry.
>> Correct!
Yesterday, While I went a home, I was fall asleep on the subway..
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Yesterday, while I\'m on my way home, I fell asleep on the subway.^^
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