Lesson 11 Dialogue

Hi there [이름] Ro!

Thanks a lot for accomplishing your homework! You did really great. I always appreciate your effort. I hope you\'ll never get tired of doing your homework  and improving your writing skills. Have a great day!

Here are my corrections for you!

~T. Eunice~

A: Can you leave a message to Mr.Lee for me? Please take a note to call me back in the June 6th, on Thursday, at 1:30 in the afternoon.
>> Can I leave a message for Mr. [Name]? Please tell him to call me back on Thursday, June 6th at 1:30 in the afternoon.
B: Okay, I will tell him that.
>> Correct

Or>> Okay Ma\'am/Sir, I will tell him that.
 A: In case that he cannot be informed about it, I would like to leave a message.
>> In case that he will not be informed about it, I would like to leave a message.

Or>> Take a note of my call back number in case he does not have it. It is [휴대전화]
 B: I got it, Do you have more message other than this?
>> I got it, Do you have more messages other than this?
A: No, could you transfer it as soon as possible?

>> Correct

Or>> I have no further messages. Can you inform him about this as early as possible?
B: Yes, I will cotact him right after our conversation.

>> Yes, I will contact him right after our conversation.