lesson 11 Working with others

2013-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I experienced a problem with a coworker a month ago. It started when we had a conflict of opinions that was making a progress of working. I had no choice but to tell a coworker about my opinion but he wasn't agreeing it. He insisted on his thought continuously. When we didn't get together, my teammate helped that we made up with. After that happened, my coworker understood my opinions and we tried to make a decision to agree with us. I was impressed by importance of helping teammate and now we gets along well other members.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]! Thanks for sending this essay tonight for me to read and suggest some thing on. Well, we definitely cannot please everybody and make them agree with us. But we can lower our pride and try to understand and work as a team. Anyway, see you in class tonight. -T. Donna I experienced a problem with a coworker a month ago. >> Correct! It started when we had a conflict of opinions that was making a progress of working. >> It started when we had a conflict of opinions while making progress at work. I had no choice but to tell a coworker about my opinion but he wasn\'t agreeing it.  >> I had no choice but to tell a coworker about my opinion but he wasn\'t agreeing with it. He insisted on his thought continuously. >> Correct! When we didn\'t get together, my teammate helped that we made up with. >> When we didn\'t get along, my teammate helped patched things up. After that happened, my coworker understood my opinions and we tried to make a decision to agree with us. >> After waht happened, my coworker understood my opinion and tried to decide to agree with me. I was impressed by importance of helping teammate and now we gets along well other members.  >> I was impressed by the importance of helping a teammate and now we get along well with the other members.

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