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2021-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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Q. What hobbies would you try soon? There are so many hobbies that I want to try soon. For example, reading some books, playing the piano, watching some movies, swimming in the poor, etc. Among them, I really want to read some books these days. As you know, while working in the hospital, I was too busy to enjoy my pastime. So I wanted to take the time to read a book in peace after quitting my job. Now I have plenty of time, so I will try to read some books above all.

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Q. What hobbies would you try soon?

>>Correct.
 There are so many hobbies that I want to try soon.

>>Correct.
 For example, reading some books, playing the piano, watching some movies, swimming in the poor, etc.

>>These hobbies are reading some books, playing the piano most often, watching some English movies, and swimming in a deep pool.
 Among them, I really want to read some books these days.

>>Correct.
 As you know, while working in the hospital, I was too busy to enjoy my pastime.

>>Correct.

So I wanted to take the time to read a book in peace after quitting my job.

>>So I wanted to take some time to read a book in a tranquil place after my resignation.
 Now I have plenty of time, so I will try to read some books above all.

>>Correct.

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