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I am glad to see your answer for today\'s question. It\'s a practice for you to improve your sentences. Keep it up! :)
-T. Maine
Q. What hobbies would you try soon?
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There are so many hobbies that I want to try soon.
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For example, reading some books, playing the piano, watching some movies, swimming in the poor, etc.
>>These hobbies are reading some books, playing the piano most often, watching some English movies, and swimming in a deep pool.
Among them, I really want to read some books these days.
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As you know, while working in the hospital, I was too busy to enjoy my pastime.
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So I wanted to take the time to read a book in peace after quitting my job.
>>So I wanted to take some time to read a book in a tranquil place after my resignation.
Now I have plenty of time, so I will try to read some books above all.
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