Lesson
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Andrea.
I\'m always thanks to you.
Tomorrow is finally my rest day!
I\'ve worked for 5days.
Most people work 5days though.
I don\'t want to say my work is harder than other\'s one.
Becuase we all work hard for our livings.
But in my case nomarlly if I work for 2 or 3days
I rest a day.
So working on for 5days wih out any restday means \"you are dead.\" In my work place.
That\'s why I\'m tired to day :(
And here there is one more reason.
Honestly I didn\'t prepare for the class.
I always prepare for our class at least 15 minutes before.
Today I didn\'t have enough time to do it.
I learned a lesson.
Make sure to prepare for the class.
I have something to say about The question I said..
I will try to ask you if I would not got lost.
Thank you for reading my homework^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Q!^^
But in my case nomarlly if I work for 2 or 3days I rest a day.
I always prepare for our class at least 15 minutes before.
I learned a lesson. Make sure to prepare for the class.
Thank you for reading my homework. ^^
You are a great student. You always try your best to give a great answer and I appreciate that.
Your pronunciation is also good. :)
When it comes to sentence construction, you can even correct your own mistake.
What I do is just o ask follow up questions so you can elaborate your answer.
Keep it up!^^
Teacher Andrea
Hi, Andrea.
>> Correct
I\'m always thanks to you.
I\'m always thanks to you.
>> I am always grateful to you.
Tomorrow is finally my rest day!
Tomorrow is finally my rest day!
>> Finally it\'s my rest day tomorrow!
I\'ve worked for 5days.
I\'ve worked for 5days.
>> Correct
Most people work 5days though.
Most people work 5days though.
>> Most people work for five days though.
I don\'t want to say my work is harder than other\'s one. Becuase we all work hard for our livings.
I don\'t want to say my work is harder than other\'s one. Becuase we all work hard for our livings.
>> I don\'t want to say that my homework is harder that other people\'s work because we all work hard to make a living.
But in my case nomarlly if I work for 2 or 3days I rest a day.
>> But in my case, normally if I work for 2 or 3 days, I can have a rest day after.
So working on for 5days wih out any restday means \"you are dead.\" In my work place.
So working on for 5days wih out any restday means \"you are dead.\" In my work place.
>> So working for five days without any rest means I am dead in my workplace.
That\'s why I\'m tired to day :(
That\'s why I\'m tired to day :(
>> Correct
And here there is one more reason.
And here there is one more reason.
>> And there is one more reason.
Honestly I didn\'t prepare for the class.
Honestly I didn\'t prepare for the class.
>> Honestly, I didn\'t prepare for the class.
I always prepare for our class at least 15 minutes before.
>> I always prepare 15 minutes before our class.
Today I didn\'t have enough time to do it.
>> I didn\'t have time enough time to do it today.
Today I didn\'t have enough time to do it.
>> I didn\'t have time enough time to do it today.
I learned a lesson. Make sure to prepare for the class.
>> I learnt a lesson today and that is to make sure to prepare for the class.
I have something to say about The question I said..
>> I have something to say about the question that I\'ve told you...
I have something to say about The question I said..
>> I have something to say about the question that I\'ve told you...
I will try to ask you if I would not got lost.
>> I will try to ask you if I would not got lost.
Thank you for reading my homework. ^^
>> Correct
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