lesson 12
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
How do you avoid family conflicts? Share your answer in a few sentences.
If I have a uncomfortable feeling about my family. I try to talk with them. The careful thing is to speak gently and honestly.
Sometimes, they can\'t empathize with me. In this case, never do not angry. It makes a worse situation.
Thank you for always worrying about me.
You\'re so kind. Donna!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] Ju!
Health is our wealth, so I really hope that you can feel better soon so that you could do your work well. Well, in our family, communication is the key to a happy and stress-free relationship to each of the members. We have to speak the words of love through kindness, gentleness, and honesty always.
You have done a very good job here on your homework! See you next week.
Feel better.
-T. Donna =)
>> If I have an uncomfortable feeling about my family, I have to talk with them.
Sometimes, they can\'t empathize with me.
You\'re so kind. Donna!
The careful thing is to speak gently and honestly.
>>Correct!
Sometimes, they can\'t empathize with me.
>>Correct!
In this case, never do not angry. It makes a worse situation.
>> In this case, never get angry. It make the situation worse.
Thank you for always worrying about me.
Thank you for always worrying about me.
>> Correct! Of course! You are welcome.
You\'re so kind. Donna!
>> You\'re so kind, Donna!
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