lesson 12 using machine in an office
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[회사 사용 장비 소개] – lesson 12 using machine in an office
Each day at work I make use of a wide variety of electronic equipment and technology.
Like most office workers, I use a computer every day to take care of my daily work.
It is an essential tool for progressing a work and analyzing a program.
As an engineer, I have reports to register important data at work.
There's other important equipment at work, too.
I often use a copy machine and scanner to make copies of files, especially if I’m handling a trivial work.
In my experience, I think what I use this equipment frequently use trivial work than business work.
The more familiar I get with different kinds of technology at work, the easier my job becomes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름], so here now are the other details of what we were discussiing in class. Now we have more details to read. However, if you choose one machine, you need to expalin the use and its importance to your work. So make sure that your topic is concentrated and will explain the main topic. Good job!
-T. Donna
Each day at work I make use of a wide variety of electronic equipment and technology.
>> Correct!Like most office workers, I use a computer every day to take care of my daily work.
>> Correct!It is an essential tool for progressing a work and analyzing a program.
>> Correct!As an engineer, I have reports to register important data at work.
>> Correct!There\'s other important equipment at work, too.
>> There are other important equipment at work, too. I often use a copy machine and scanner to make copies of files, especially if I’m handling a trivial work.
>> I often use a photocopying machine and a scanner to make copies of files, especially if I'm handling a trivial work.In my experience, I think what I use this equipment frequently use trivial work than business work.
>> In my experience, I think I using this equipment frequently is a trivial work than business work.The more familiar I get with different kinds of technology at work, the easier my job becomes.
>> Correct!
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