Lesson 2

2015-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Linguistic: This task is high because teacher is assessing the student's’ second language. Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and the students are going to do whole class activities two times. Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old, they already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them. Involvement: Most of the instructions are easy to follow and simple, so the students can be more engaged in the activity. Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner beforehand presenting a whole class. Rubric 1) Student uses the correct verb form. Excellent - All past tense verbs used correctly. Good - Most of past tense verbs used correctly, with a few exception. Improving - 4 or more verbs are incorrectly used. 2) Vocabulary Excellent - Wide variety of vocabulary and vocabulary extends topic. Good - Vocabulary completes but does not extend topic. Improving - Some use of targeted vocabulary and repetition evident. 3) Contents Excellent - Contents are highly-detailed. Good - Contents are all comprehensible. Improving - Some necessary contents are missing.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Miss [이름]! Please check the corrections that I made here. There are some sentences that I am not really familiar with. So, just go over them, please. ~Kelly^^ Linguistic: This task is high because teacher is assessing the student\'s’ second language. >> Linguistic: This task is of high importance because the teacher is assessing the student\'s’ second language.Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and the students are going to do whole class activities two times. >> Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and they are going to do whole class activities two times. Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old, they already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them.>> Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old. They already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them. Involvement: Most of the instructions are easy to follow and simple, so the students can be more engaged in the activity. >> Correct.Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner beforehand presenting a whole class.>> Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner before presenting in the whole class.Rubric1) Student uses the correct verb form. >>A student uses the correct verb form. Excellent - All past tense verbs used correctly.>> Excellent - All past tense verbs are used correctly.Good - Most of past tense verbs used correctly, with a few exception. >> Good - Most of past tense verbs are used correctly, with a few exception.Improving - 4 or more verbs are incorrectly used.>> Correct.2) VocabularyExcellent - Wide variety of vocabulary and vocabulary extends topic. >> Excellent - Wide variety of vocabulary *** what do you mean by vocabulary extends topic.Good - Vocabulary completes but does not extend topic. >> Good - Vocabulary is complete. *** what do you mean by but does not extend topic.Improving - Some use of targeted vocabulary and repetition evident.>> Improving - Some use targeted vocabulary and repetition evident in _____.3) ContentsExcellent - Contents are highly-detailed. >> Correct.Good - Contents are all comprehensible. >> Correct.Improving - Some necessary contents are missing. >> Correct.

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