Lesson 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Linguistic: This task is high because teacher is assessing the student's’ second language.
Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and the students are going to do whole class activities two times.
Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old, they already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them.
Involvement: Most of the instructions are easy to follow and simple, so the students can be more engaged in the activity.
Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner beforehand presenting a whole class.
Rubric
1) Student uses the correct verb form.
Excellent - All past tense verbs used correctly.
Good - Most of past tense verbs used correctly, with a few exception.
Improving - 4 or more verbs are incorrectly used.
2) Vocabulary
Excellent - Wide variety of vocabulary and vocabulary extends topic.
Good - Vocabulary completes but does not extend topic.
Improving - Some use of targeted vocabulary and repetition evident.
3) Contents
Excellent - Contents are highly-detailed.
Good - Contents are all comprehensible.
Improving - Some necessary contents are missing.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Miss [이름]!
Please check the corrections that I made here. There are some sentences that I am not really familiar with. So, just go over them, please.
~Kelly^^
Linguistic: This task is high because teacher is assessing the student\'s’ second language.
>> Linguistic: This task is of high importance because the teacher is assessing the student\'s’ second language.Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and the students are going to do whole class activities two times.
>> Interactional: The teacher makes the students change their partners during pair-work and they are going to do whole class activities two times. Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old, they already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them.>> Metalinguistic: Our target age group is 8-9 years old. They already learned simple past but irregular verbs will be challenging to them.
Involvement: Most of the instructions are easy to follow and simple, so the students can be more engaged in the activity.
>> Correct.Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner beforehand presenting a whole class.>> Physical: The students are in a familiar place because they’re going to share their past experience with a partner before presenting in the whole class.Rubric1) Student uses the correct verb form. >>A student uses the correct verb form.
Excellent - All past tense verbs used correctly.>> Excellent - All past tense verbs are used correctly.Good - Most of past tense verbs used correctly, with a few exception.
>> Good - Most of past tense verbs are used correctly, with a few exception.Improving - 4 or more verbs are incorrectly used.>> Correct.2) VocabularyExcellent - Wide variety of vocabulary and vocabulary extends topic.
>> Excellent - Wide variety of vocabulary
*** what do you mean by vocabulary extends topic.Good - Vocabulary completes but does not extend topic.
>> Good - Vocabulary is complete.
*** what do you mean by but does not extend topic.Improving - Some use of targeted vocabulary and repetition evident.>> Improving - Some use targeted vocabulary and repetition evident in _____.3) ContentsExcellent - Contents are highly-detailed.
>> Correct.Good - Contents are all comprehensible.
>> Correct.Improving - Some necessary contents are missing.
>> Correct.
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