lesson 2 Where I live

2013-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

Let me introduce my home. I have a few different pieces of furniture in my bedroom. First of all, in the left-hand corner, you can find my desk. This is where I study in the evenings. Beside by desk, there is my bed. It's just a single bed, but its mattress is soft. And on the right-hand side you can see a small clothes chest which I keep my clothes in. Finally, on the desk, there is a laptop computer. That's my favorite piece of appliances because I bought the laptop with my first salary. Even though my room is not that neat, I think it is very comfortable and cozy to take a rest. 1) John is writing a letter. What is John writing? 2) She walks home from school. How does she go to home from school? 3) The children are sitting in the garden. Where are the children? 4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays. What does Peter on Sundays? 5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden. Where does your rabbit live?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]! Your essay down here looks really neat and tidy with grammar. It seems that you looked into the writing really well before submitting it to me. Well, quite obviously, you made simple but very good sentences. Moreover, your points were clear and smooth to understand. You did a wonderful job on this. Anyway, thanks for doing the homework as well. Keep it up always! -T. Donna Let me introduce my home. >> Correct! I have a few different pieces of furniture in my bedroom. >> Correct! First of all, in the left-hand corner, you can find my desk. >> Correct! This is where I study in the evenings. Beside by desk, there is my bed. >> This is where I study in the evening. Beside the desk is my bed. It\'s just a single bed, but its mattress is soft. >> Correct! Or: Do not use comma anymore. And on the right-hand side you can see a small clothes chest in which I keep my clothes. >> On the right-hand side you can see a small clothes chest which I keep my clothes in. Finally, on the desk, there is a laptop computer. >> Correct! That\'s my favorite piece of appliances because I bought the laptop with my first salary. >> Correct! Even though my room is not that neat, I think it is very comfortable and cozy to take a rest.>> Correct!1) John is writing a letter.What is John writing? >> Correct!2) She walks home from school.How does she go to home from school?>> Who walks home from school?3) The children are sitting in the garden.Where are the children?>> Where are the children sitting?4) Peter runs with his dog on Sundays.What does Peter on Sundays?>> When does Peter run with his dog?5) My rabbit has a cage in the garden.Where does your rabbit live? What does your rabbit have in the garden?

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