Lesson 27. Your Next vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to visit Korean East sea.
As tou know, thesedays Corona virus is spreading in my country. So in this year I couldn\'t have been ocean and i didn\'t go to there. If i go to the east sea, I will want to go to there with my girl friend. And we will play happily there and lent a pension. We will also do barbeque in the pension. I\'m sure it would be a lot of fun!
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
I hope you could go there with you lovely girlfriend.
For now, enjoy the time and be free - HAHAHA.
I would like to visit Korean East sea.
>>CORRECT!
As tou know, thesedays Corona virus is spreading in my country.
>>As you know, the Corona virus is spreading in our country these days.
So in this year I couldn\'t have been ocean and i didn\'t go to there.
>>So this year I couldn\'t go to the sea and didn\'t go there.
If i go to the east sea, I will want to go to there with my girl friend.
>>If I will go to the east sea, I would like to go there with my girlfriend.
And we will play happily there and lent a pension.
>>And we will have fun at the pension.
We will also do barbeque in the pension.
>>We\'ll also have a barbecue at the pension.
I\'m sure it would be a lot of fun!
>>CORRECT!
OR: It\'ll be so much fun!
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