lesson 4 family dinner

[essay] I went out and had a dinner with my family last month. My parents and I were there. We shared a very delicious meal at local restaurant. There are some famous restaurants for garlic food. We just talked about how everything was for all of us. I work far from the home so my family is worried about me. Also, my parents inquired about corporate life. I told them that my job is very enjoyable in order to relieve them. We had a good time while talking with each other's work. [homework] 1) I - mine ) you - yours 3) he - his 4) she - hers 5) it - its 6) we - ours 7) they - theirs

Now this is a very good essay. It has minimal mistakes and the pattern of the introduction, body and conclusion were just all present and clear. You also had a smooth transition that makes the answer more cohesive and easy to understand. Well done with the essay and the perfect homewrok too! See you tonight in class. -T. Donna I went out and had a dinner with my family last month. >> Correct! My parents and I were there. >> Correct! We shared a very delicious meal at local restaurant. >> We shared a very delicious meal at a local restaurant. There are some famous restaurants for garlic food. >> Correct! We just talked about how everything was for all of us. >> Correct! I work far from the home so my family is worried about me. >> Correct! Or: I work far from home so my family is worried about me. Also, my parents inquired about corporate life. >> Correct! I told them that my job is very enjoyable in order to relieve them. >> Correct! We had a good time while talking with each other\'s work.>> Correct!1) I-mine >> Correct!) you-yours >> Correct!3) he-his >> Correct!4) she-hers  >> Correct!5) it-its  >> Correct!6) we-ours >> Correct!7) they-theirs >> Correct!