lesson 5/ 6 homework

2022-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Q1: Do you exercise? Share your answer in a few sentences. > Yes, I do. I actually work out two days or three days a week. I enjoy doing pilates. Q2 :Do you prefer eating out or preparing your own food? Share your answer in a few sentences. > I prefer eating out a little more. Because I\'m not good at cook. And it\'s too much to prepare also. Now day, I mostly use delivery service. Thank you Donna!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] Ju!

Thank you so much for your homework answers! You exercising and eating right are key to a healthy life. So, looking at your sentences below, you got the first one perfectly. For the second answer, there are a few suggestions I made to make your sentences even better. 

Thank you so much for your time and effort in sending these answers. Well done!

-T. Donna =)

Q1: Do you exercise? Share your answer in a few sentences.

> Yes, I do. I actually work out two days or three days a week. I enjoy doing pilates.
>> Correct!
Or:  Pilates

Q2 :Do you prefer eating out or preparing your own food? Share your answer in a few sentences.
> I prefer eating out a little more. Because I\'m not good at cook. 
>> I prefer eating out a little more because I\'m not good at cooking. 

And it\'s too much to prepare also. Now day, I mostly use delivery service.
>> And it\'s too much to prepare also. Nowadays, I mostly use  the delivery service. 

Thank you Donna!
>> Correct!

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