lesson 5: BUYING CAR
학생이 쓴 원문
Hyundai is famous in Korea. I think Benz is famous for foreign cars. Because Hyundai performance is very perfect and Benz car styling is classy.
강사 첨삭
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Hyundai is famous in Korea. I think Benz is famous for foreign cars.
>> Hyundai is famous in Korea. I think Benz is a famous foreign brand of cars.
Because Hyundai performance is very perfect and Benz car styling is classy.
>> Hyundai\'s performance is perfect and Benz\'s car style is classy.
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