Lesson 5 : Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am interested in space!
So when I heard space travel, I was very intrigued.
If I had been rich and had a lot of money, I would have signed up for space travel.
Could we go to space in the future?..
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ella. The owner of Tesla and Space-X, together with some chosen people, have already tried traveling to space for a pilot or test tour. It was indeed successful. If we had the money and connections, we could also possibly go travel to space.
>>> correct
So when I heard space travel, I was very intrigued.
So when I heard space travel, I was very intrigued.
>>>So when I heard of space travel, I was very intrigued.
If I had been rich and had a lot of money, I would have signed up for space travel.
>>> correct
Could we go to space in the future?..
Could we go to space in the future?..
>>> correct
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