lesson 6 homework

2022-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Q : What is a very important thing that you always bring on a trip? Answer in a few sentences. There are a lot of important thing. Above all I can\'t live without a cell phone charger. I\'m not good at taking care of things but I really take care of this. I love aerobic exercise. >> Correct! Or: I love aerobic exercises. (this sentence means \"active\" right?? ) Donna, your feedback is so touching that health is important for development. You are the best teacher. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] Ju!

You are the best student too! You exert effort in the things you choose to do. Also, you prioritize the activities that will make you more successful in the future.

Anyway, thank you for this homework answer. Bringing a cellphone charger means that your phone is hooked to it always. The smartphone is a paramount in our lives as it does not only connect but also a tool for our work.

In addition, your question was very good. I will give you more examples in class when I see you on Monday.

So, I wish you a very meaningful weekend. Relax and prepare for another week. Stay safe.

-T. Donna =)

There are a lot of important thing.

>> There are a lot of important things.

Above all I can\'t live without a cell phone charger.

>> Correct!

Or: Above all, I can\'t live without a cell phone charger. (Add a comma.)

I\'m not good at taking care of things but I really take care of this.

>> Correct!

I love aerobic exercise.
>> Correct!
Or: I love aerobic exercises. (this sentence means \"active\" right?? )

>> This sentence means there are many kinds of \'aerobic exercises\'. Let\'s try another example: 1.) I love Korean dishes. 2.) I take care of home pets. 3. She did some mathematical problems.

Donna, your feedback is so touching that health is important for development.
You are the best teacher. Thank you.

>> Correct!

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