lesson 6 Sport

2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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[homework] 1) Whose is this bike? Is it really him ? 2) Is he your teacher? 3) Hey Ron! This is not our car. Ours is red. 4) Lisa broke her left leg. 5) Mine My friend lives in a big house, but theirs is much bigger. [essay] Q. I am going to give you a situation for you to act out. Let's suppose that you are going to play badminton with your friends on campus. Call a person in charge of reservation, and ask three or four questions to reserve badminton court. A> Hello, I'm calling to ask you about reserving badminton court for four people. First of all, how long can we use it at a time? We are going to spend two hours playing badminton. Second, I heard the admission fee has been increased recently. So I would like to know how much it cost to use the court. Finally, I'd like to ask if you sell a shuttle cock. Because we have no shuttle cocks, so I need to buy one. Thank you for your kind answers.

강사 첨삭

Here are the grammar suggestions Sir [이름]. First is the homework and then your inquiry on how to ask the question correctly. So I hope you can take note and remember all the right patterns. -T. Donna 1) Whose is this bike? Is it really him ? >> Whose is this bike? Is it really his?  2) Is he your teacher? >> Is he your teacher?  3) Hey Ron! This is not our car. Ours is red. >>  Correct!4) Lisa broke her left leg. >>  Correct!5) Mine My friend lives in a big house, but theirs is much bigger.>> My friend lives in a big house, but theirs is much bigger.Q. I am going to give you a situation for you to act out. >>  Correct! Let\'s suppose that you are going to play badminton with your friends on campus. >> Correct! Call a person in charge of reservation, and ask three or four questions to reserve badminton court.>> Call a person in charge of reservation, and ask three or four questions to reserve the badminton court.A> Hello, I\'m calling to ask you about reserving badminton court for four people. >> A> Hello, I\'m calling to ask you about reserving the badminton court for four people.First of all, how long can we use it at a time? We are going to spend two hours playing badminton. >> Correct!Second, I heard the admission fee has been increased recently. So I would like to know how much it cost to use the court. >> Second, I heard the admission fee has been increased recently. So I would like to know how much it costs to use the court.Finally, I\'d like to ask if you sell a shuttle cock. >> Correct! Because we have no shuttle cocks, so I need to buy one. Thank you for your kind answers. >> Correct!

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