lesson 7 Your Closest Neighbor

2013-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

lesson 7 Your Closest Neighbor I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people. Because I live in the company dormitory, I always live with them. One of them who is Jae Hyun Ko is best friendly neighbor. He is one year old more than me. I can still remember how he first approached me when I was still new in the dormitory. When I experienced Internship to current company, my company senior introduced Jae Hyun Ko to me. After six months, I Joined the company and I happily met again him as roommate and neighbor. I’m very surprise. We sometime drink in the dormitory and we are counseling to worry each other. I have already established a meaningful friendship with him.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]! Well done with this composition! I know that you have memorised the pattern already and that you wrok on very good paragraph endings but make sure that your body will soon be error free. You can do it. Thanks for sending this. As I already told you, please send your essay earlier for me to check more efficiently. -T. Donna I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people.  >> Correct! Because I live in the company dormitory, I always live with them. >> Correct! Or: Because I live in the company dormitory, I always see them. One of them who is Jae Hyun Ko is best friendly neighbor. >> One of them is Jae Hyun Ko is my friendly neighbor. He is one year old more than me. >> He is one year older than me. I can still remember how he first approached me when I was still new in the dormitory. >> Correct! When I experienced Internship to current company, my company senior introduced Jae Hyun Ko to me. >> When I had my internship in my current company, my company senior introduced Jae Hyun Ko to me. After six months, I Joined the company and I happily met again him as roommate and neighbor. >> After six months, I joined the company and I happily met him again as a roommate and neighbor. I'm very surprise. >> I was very surprised. We sometime drink in the dormitory and we are counseling to worry each other. >> We sometime drink in the dormitory and we are counseling to lessen the worry of each other. I have already established a meaningful friendship with him. >> Correct!

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