lesson 8 Gadgets

lesson 8 Gadgets The technology I use most often these days is my wireless laptop. I bought my laptop with my first salary a few months ago. When I first received the laptop, i wasn’t very excited. This is because I use a computer to home. I mostly can use a school and a company. But a few days later, I often have a work in my home and outside. When I can use my laptop, at present, I'm satisfied with making the best use as searching a information and programming. Now, I often take my laptop to cafes during my break time and holiday. I use it to do important research while enjoying sweet snacks and coffee. Despite my initial reaction, it is the most favorite thing of my own.

Hi there Sir [이름]! Thank you very much for sending this essay earlier than usual. I hope you make it a habit to sent it early all the time. Anyway, this writing is very clear with its ideas, the parts are complete with minor grammatical mistakes for you to study and pay attention to. So here are the corrections, spot the not and do not forget the right ones. See you in class tonight! -T. Donna The technology I use most often these days is my wireless laptop. >> Correct! I bought my laptop with my first salary a few months ago. >> Correct! When I first received the laptop, i wasn't very excited. >> Correct! Or: I not i This is because I use a computer to home. I mostly can use a school and a company. >> This is because I use a computer at home, I mostly use it in school and in the company. But a few days later, I often have a work in my home and outside. >> But lately, I often have work at home and outside. When I can use my laptop, at present, I\'m satisfied with making the best use as searching a information and programming.  >> When I can use my laptop, at present, I\'m satisfied with using it for searching information and programming. Now, I often take my laptop to cafes during my break time and holiday. >> Correct! Or: holidays. I use it to do important research while enjoying sweet snacks and coffee. >> Correct!  Despite my initial reaction, it is the most favorite thing of my own. >> Despite my initial reaction, it is my most favorite thing.