lesson 9 Introduce Company

The company I work for is called Samsung Display Company. I've been here for about 2 years. My company is located in Tang-Jeong, Asan, at country side. My company was founded a few month ago which is April 1st. It demerged from Samsung Electronics. At present, it has branch offices in Ki-Heung, Yong-in. The main business it does is manufacturing TV and cell phone display panels. I'm very proud to work for such a well-known company as the first the company.

Hi there^^

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I made some corrections, so if you have some questions just ask me in our class^^

It is nice to work in a well-known company^^

Anyway, tell me more about that in our class^^

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~T.Donna^^

The company I work for is called Samsung Display Company.

>>Correct

OR >>I work for Samsung Display Company.

I\'ve been here for about 2 years.

>>I\'ve been working here for about 2 years now.

My company is located in Tang-Jeong, Asan, at country side.

>>My company is located in Tang-Jeong, Asan, in the countryside.

 My company was founded a few month ago which is April 1st.

>>My company was founded a few months ago, last April 1st.

It demerged from Samsung Electronics.

>>CORRECT^^ 

At present, it has branch offices in Ki-Heung, Yong-in.

>>At present, it has branches and offices in Ki-Heung, Yong-in.

The main business it does is manufacturing TV and cell phone display panels.

>>Correct

OR >> It\'s main business is to manufacture TV and cell phone display panels.

I\'m very proud to work for such a well-known company as the first the company.

>>I\'m very proud to work in a well-known company and it\'s my first company.^^