[Lesson2] What is you favorite seson? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is summer.
Because, I can enjoy many leisure sports. For example, swimming and surfing.
And I don't like cold.
I like warm better than cold.
강사 첨삭
Hi Carrie! Thank you for your time and effort in answering your homework. I really appreciate it! I made corrections on your sentences. Here it is. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
My favorite season is summer.
>> CORRECT!
Because, I can enjoy many leisure sports. For example, swimming and surfing.
>> I like summer because I can enjoy many leisure sports like swimming and surfing.
And I don\'t like cold.
>> I don\'t like cold weather.
I like warm better than cold.
>> I like warm weather better than cold weather.
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