Lesson5 : My house
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you remember the day I was in the bad condition when we had a class?
I think I didn't prepare much about the class,so I reviewed and thought about the answer again.
Here's my new answer. I'm not satisfied with it though.
Please remain my original sentences when you correct my writing.
I like to compare them:)
I live in a two story building,and I live on the first floor.
My house is quite small because I live alone.
It has one bedroom,one bathroom and a kitchen.
I have a bed,a desk,a dressing table,a closet in the bed room.
I hung up a white board on the wall recently.
It helps me to remember things I have to do and need to do.
Because it's in a residential area, it is quiet all day.
I like to feel relaxed in my house.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]! I'm happy to see your composition here! I encourage you to do more. It can improve your written English. Well, I do remember that day when you said you don't feel good. You did great in our class before even though you were sick. __Karen__
Here's my correction:
Do you remember the day I was in the bad condition when we had a class?
>>Do you remember the day I was in a bad condition when we had a class?
I think I didn't prepare much about the class,so I reviewed and thought about the answer again.
>>Correct!
Here's my new answer. I'm not satisfied with it though.
Here's my new answer. I'm not satisfied with it though.
>>Correct!
Please remain my original sentences when you correct my writing.
Please remain my original sentences when you correct my writing.
>>Please keep my original sentences when you correct my writing.
I like to compare them:)
>>Correct!
I live in a two story building,and I live on the first floor.
I like to compare them:)
>>Correct!
I live in a two story building,and I live on the first floor.
>>Correct!
My house is quite small because I live alone.
My house is quite small because I live alone.
>>Correct!
It has one bedroom,one bathroom and a kitchen.
It has one bedroom,one bathroom and a kitchen.
>>Correct!
I have a bed,a desk,a dressing table,a closet in the bed room.
I have a bed,a desk,a dressing table,a closet in the bed room.
>>I have a bed,a desk,a dressing table, and a closet in my bed room.
I hung up a white board on the wall recently.
I hung up a white board on the wall recently.
>>Correct!
It helps me to remember things I have to do and need to do.
It helps me to remember things I have to do and need to do.
>>Correct!
Because it's in a residential area, it is quiet all day.
Because it's in a residential area, it is quiet all day.
>>Correct!
I like to feel relaxed in my house.
I like to feel relaxed in my house.
>>Correct!
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