Lesson6 : Things in my room

Here's for another lesson. I know lesson5 and 6 are similar,but I just wanted to practice both. I have a bed,a desk,chairs and a laptop. Next to my desk,I have a bookcase. My books are arranged by two categories. One is about English and the other is not. Next to my bookcase,there is a closet. I hang up most of my clothes in the closet,but it doesn't have enough space anymore. In front of the closet,there's my bed. On the bed,I pile up several books I read thesedays,a diary and two pink rabbit dolls. One is big,and the other is small. Beside the bed,there is a lamp. The other side of the desk,there's a dressing table. Next to the dressing table,I put my guitar on the stand. It is for my hobby,and it is also a good decoration.

Hi [이름]! Thanks again for sending me another composition. I did keep your original sentence for your comparison. Anyways, I envy you for having a very organized room, mine is always a mess! See you in class! __karen__   Here's my correction: Here's for another lesson. >>Correct! >>OR Here's for the other lesson I know lesson5 and 6 are similar,but I just wanted to practice both. >>Correct! I have a bed,a desk,chairs and a laptop. >>Correct! Next to my desk,I have a bookcase. >>Correct! My books are arranged by two categories. >>Correct! One is about English and the other is not. >>Correct! Next to my bookcase,there is a closet. >>Correct! I hang up most of my clothes in the closet,but it doesn't have enough space anymore. >>Correct! [Maybe you added more clothes to the ones you already have. :)] In front of the closet,there's my bed. >>Correct! On the bed,I pile up several books I read these days,a diary and two pink rabbit dolls. >>Correct! One is big,and the other is small. >>Correct! Beside the bed,there is a lamp. >>Correct! The other side of the desk,there's a dressing table. >>On the other side of the desk,there's a dressing table. Next to the dressing table,I put my guitar on the stand. >>Correct! It is for my hobby,and it is also a good decoration. >>Correct!